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Hearing about [[Jinkai]]'s plans for domination using the [[Moon Bird Recipe]], he was entrusted with the recipe by his lover, [[Shun Min]], at the cost of her life and fled with the group on his heels.

He would appear suddenly at the [[New State Army Headquarters]] during the [[Dunan Unification War]], offering to open a restaurant at the castle for the [[New State Army]]. This was his attempt to hide himself from agents of the Group. He presented him as a bright and cheerful chef but this hid his anxiety and fear of being found.

He would appear suddenly at the [[New State Army Headquarters]] during the [[Dunan Unification War]], offering to open a [[restaurant]] at the castle for the [[New State Army]]. This was his attempt to hide himself from agents of the Group. He presented him as a bright and cheerful chef but this hid his anxiety and fear of being found.

He would come to be challenged in a series of cook-offs which, though innocuous as first, increased with intensity and danger as the Black Dragon Group located him and sent their agents to recover the Moon Bird Recipe.

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 Hearing about [[Jinkai]]'s plans for domination using the [[Moon Bird Recipe]], he was entrusted with the recipe by his lover, [[Shun Min]], at the cost of her life and fled with the group on his heels.
-He would appear suddenly at the [[New State Army Headquarters]] during the [[Dunan Unification War]], offering to open a restaurant at the castle for the [[New State Army]]. This was his attempt to hide himself from agents of the Group. He presented him as a bright and cheerful chef but this hid his anxiety and fear of being found.
+He would appear suddenly at the [[New State Army Headquarters]] during the [[Dunan Unification War]], offering to open a [[restaurant]] at the castle for the [[New State Army]]. This was his attempt to hide himself from agents of the Group. He presented him as a bright and cheerful chef but this hid his anxiety and fear of being found.
 He would come to be challenged in a series of cook-offs which, though innocuous as first, increased with intensity and danger as the Black Dragon Group located him and sent their agents to recover the Moon Bird Recipe.