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==Information==

Tinto City is a renowned mining town that was built against the slope of a steep mountain. Its main industry is in extracting iron ore, [[water gem]]s, and other precious metals from the [[Tinto Mines]] ~~and selling them for use in the production~~ of weapons and armor~~, generating~~ a large profit for the city and ~~allowing~~ it to fund a powerful military.

Tinto City is a renowned mining town that was built against the slope of a steep mountain. Its main industry is in extracting iron ore, [[water gem]]s, and other precious metals from the [[Tinto Mines]]. The sale of weapons and armor produced from these resources generates a large profit for the city and allows it to fund a powerful military.

As long as the city has existed, the head of the mining guild has also served as mayor of the city. Membership of the guild required the recommendation of at least two guild members. Usually a set of parents would nominate their own children to become members of the guild.

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-Tinto City is a renowned mining town that was built against the slope of a steep mountain. Its main industry is in extracting iron ore, [[water gem]]s, and other precious metals from the [[Tinto Mines]] and selling them for use in the production of weapons and armor, generating a large profit for the city and allowing it to fund a powerful military.
+Tinto City is a renowned mining town that was built against the slope of a steep mountain. Its main industry is in extracting iron ore, [[water gem]]s, and other precious metals from the [[Tinto Mines]]. The sale of weapons and armor produced from these resources generates a large profit for the city and allows it to fund a powerful military.
 As long as the city has existed, the head of the mining guild has also served as mayor of the city. Membership of the guild required the recommendation of at least two guild members. Usually a set of parents would nominate their own children to become members of the guild.