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==Biography==

{{quote | The most powerful general is most certainly General Teo McDohl, victor of a hundred out of a hundred battles. Don't you agree? | Imperial Guardsman}}

Teo McDohl was one of the [[Great General|Five Great Generals of the Scarlet Moon Empire]], who had fought under [[Barbarosa Rugner]] during the [[War of Succession]]. He was known as the invincible general because of his amazing feat of having never lost a single battle.

Teo McDohl was one of the [[Great General|Five Great Generals of the Scarlet Moon Empire]], who had fought under [[Barbarosa Rugner]] during the [[War of Succession]]. General of the 2nd [[Imperial Army|Imperial Central Army]], he was known as the invincible general because of his amazing feat of having never lost a single battle.

He was incredibly devoted to Barbarosa and was known for his many feats of valor during the War of Succession. His noble bearing and personality earned him the respect of many people as well as powerful loyalty from his subordinates. He was a physically tall, imposing figure especially when clad in his silver armor and yellow cape.

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 ==Biography==
 {{quote | The most powerful general is most certainly General Teo McDohl, victor of a hundred out of a hundred battles. Don't you agree? | Imperial Guardsman}}
-Teo McDohl was one of the [[Great General|Five Great Generals of the Scarlet Moon Empire]], who had fought under [[Barbarosa Rugner]] during the [[War of Succession]]. He was known as the invincible general because of his amazing feat of having never lost a single battle.
+Teo McDohl was one of the [[Great General|Five Great Generals of the Scarlet Moon Empire]], who had fought under [[Barbarosa Rugner]] during the [[War of Succession]]. General of the 2nd [[Imperial Army|Imperial Central Army]], he was known as the invincible general because of his amazing feat of having never lost a single battle.
 He was incredibly devoted to Barbarosa and was known for his many feats of valor during the War of Succession. His noble bearing and personality earned him the respect of many people as well as powerful loyalty from his subordinates. He was a physically tall, imposing figure especially when clad in his silver armor and yellow cape.