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[[File:Sergei is proud of his invention.png|220px|thumb|left|Let me tell you about a dude named Manu....]]

Sergei was a ~~decent, hard-working~~ inventor ~~whose~~ designs were often scorned by the authorities of ~~the~~ time ~~as their advanced nature meant that few could appreciate their potential~~. ~~Because of this~~, by the time of the [[Gate Rune War]], ~~Sergei for all~~ his ~~intelligence~~ had ~~not sold a single invention in his time~~.

Sergei was a diligent and innovative inventor known for his advanced designs that were often underappreciated and scorned by the authorities of his time. Despite his intelligence and hard work, he faced challenges in selling his inventions, and by the time of the [[Gate Rune War]], none of his creations had been successfully marketed.

His work was ~~inspired~~ by ~~the concept~~ of ~~expanding freedom for those who used~~ his ~~inventions~~. ~~As such~~, he found [[Hero (Suikoden)|~~the~~ hero]] ~~open~~ to his ideas ~~while he lamented his situation at a tavern in [[Kaku]]~~ and so ~~became an early member of~~ the [[Toran Liberation Army]].

His inventive work was driven by a desire to expand freedom and benefit users of his creations. Drowning his sorrows in a tavern in [[Kaku]], he found the [[Hero (Suikoden)|hero]] receptive to his ideas and so joined the [[Toran Liberation Army]] as an early member.

Sergei ~~installed~~ his invention, the [[elevator]], at [[Toran Castle]] ~~which~~ proved to be a ~~popular~~ time ~~saver~~ for Liberation Army ~~officials~~. In combat, Sergei ~~wielded~~ his spanner~~. The spanner was his favorite work~~ tool ~~and was vital~~ in ~~his~~ development of ~~the~~ elevator.

A notable achievement by Sergei was the installation of his invention, the [[elevator]], at [[Toran Castle]]. This creation proved to be a valuable time-saving device for officials within the Liberation Army. In combat, Sergei utilized his trusty spanner, an essential tool in the development of his elevator invention.

~~After~~ the Gate Rune War, Sergei ~~earned great wealth from his~~ inventions and ~~the~~ patents and royalties ~~that stemmed from them~~.

Following the conclusion of the [[Gate Rune War]], Sergei's fortunes changed dramatically. His inventions gained widespread recognition and adoption, leading to significant wealth earned through patents and royalties.

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 [[File:Sergei is proud of his invention.png|220px|thumb|left|Let me tell you about a dude named Manu....]]
-Sergei was a decent, hard-working inventor whose designs were often scorned by the authorities of the time as their advanced nature meant that few could appreciate their potential. Because of this, by the time of the [[Gate Rune War]], Sergei for all his intelligence had not sold a single invention in his time.
+Sergei was a diligent and innovative inventor known for his advanced designs that were often underappreciated and scorned by the authorities of his time. Despite his intelligence and hard work, he faced challenges in selling his inventions, and by the time of the [[Gate Rune War]], none of his creations had been successfully marketed.
-His work was inspired by the concept of expanding freedom for those who used his inventions. As such, he found [[Hero (Suikoden)|the hero]] open to his ideas while he lamented his situation at a tavern in [[Kaku]] and so became an early member of the [[Toran Liberation Army]].
+His inventive work was driven by a desire to expand freedom and benefit users of his creations. Drowning his sorrows in a tavern in [[Kaku]], he found the [[Hero (Suikoden)|hero]] receptive to his ideas and so joined the [[Toran Liberation Army]] as an early member.
-Sergei installed his invention, the [[elevator]], at [[Toran Castle]] which proved to be a popular time saver for Liberation Army officials. In combat, Sergei wielded his spanner. The spanner was his favorite work tool and was vital in his development of the elevator.
+A notable achievement by Sergei was the installation of his invention, the [[elevator]], at [[Toran Castle]]. This creation proved to be a valuable time-saving device for officials within the Liberation Army. In combat, Sergei utilized his trusty spanner, an essential tool in the development of his elevator invention.
-After the Gate Rune War, Sergei earned great wealth from his inventions and the patents and royalties that stemmed from them.
+Following the conclusion of the [[Gate Rune War]], Sergei's fortunes changed dramatically. His inventions gained widespread recognition and adoption, leading to significant wealth earned through patents and royalties.
 ==Game info==