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The main points of his style were to maintain good health (through good eating) and to train the body to the utmost limit. The [[White Tiger Rune]] that both master and student of the style bear is considered to be a mark of the dojo. He did come off as a bit brazen due to his habit of dine-and-dashing, but his skills and passion for martial arts were genuine.

During the [[Dunan Unification War]], he would join the [[New State Army]] after being reunited with his first, and only, student, [[Wakaba]], in [[Crom Village]]. At first he was able to persuade Wakaba that his dine-and-dashing was part of his training but eventually came clean after continued scrutiny. As a member of the army's infantry, he put his Dragon-style martial arts to good use, fighting alongside his student.

During the [[Dunan Unification War]], he would join the [[New State Army]] after being reunited with his first, and only, student, [[Wakaba]], in [[Crom Village]]. At first he was able to persuade Wakaba that his dine-and-dashing was part of his training but eventually came clean after continued scrutiny.

As a member of the army's infantry, he put his Dragon-style martial arts to good use, fighting alongside his student. Together, the two would train daily, never wavering in their efforts or their pure-hearted desire to become stronger.

After the war, Long Chan-Chan continued on his demanding regimen and continued to tutor Wakaba, all for the sake of one day achieving his dream.

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 The main points of his style were to maintain good health (through good eating) and to train the body to the utmost limit. The [[White Tiger Rune]] that both master and student of the style bear is considered to be a mark of the dojo. He did come off as a bit brazen due to his habit of dine-and-dashing, but his skills and passion for martial arts were genuine.
-During the [[Dunan Unification War]], he would join the [[New State Army]] after being reunited with his first, and only, student, [[Wakaba]], in [[Crom Village]]. At first he was able to persuade Wakaba that his dine-and-dashing was part of his training but eventually came clean after continued scrutiny. As a member of the army's infantry, he put his Dragon-style martial arts to good use, fighting alongside his student.
+During the [[Dunan Unification War]], he would join the [[New State Army]] after being reunited with his first, and only, student, [[Wakaba]], in [[Crom Village]]. At first he was able to persuade Wakaba that his dine-and-dashing was part of his training but eventually came clean after continued scrutiny.
+As a member of the army's infantry, he put his Dragon-style martial arts to good use, fighting alongside his student. Together, the two would train daily, never wavering in their efforts or their pure-hearted desire to become stronger.
 After the war, Long Chan-Chan continued on his demanding regimen and continued to tutor Wakaba, all for the sake of one day achieving his dream.