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Lo Wen is a member of the [[Lampdragon Bandits]]~~. Although she dressed~~ and ~~often acted like~~ a bandit, ~~overall~~, she ~~was~~ the most well-mannered and ~~put together of the trio~~. ~~As a~~ warrior, she wielded a heavy ball on a chain, ~~which she flung at the enemy~~ with ~~great~~ force.

Lo Wen was a spirited member of the notorious [[Lampdragon Bandits]], adopting the appearance and mannerisms befitting a bandit. Yet, among the trio, she stood out as the most well-mannered and composed individual. A skilled warrior, she wielded a heavy ball attached to a chain, employing it with remarkable force to combat her adversaries.

~~She once lived~~ in [[Two River City]], ~~but after it was discovered that she was embezzling money from one~~ of the ~~members of Two River~~'s ~~three~~ Houses of Parliament, she had to ~~leave town in a hurry~~. ~~She would then meet~~ [[Gijimu]] and [[Koyu]] ~~and became part of~~ their group.

In the past, Lo Wen resided in [[Two River City]]. However, her actions caught the attention of the city's Three Houses of Parliament when they discovered her involvement in embezzling money. Faced with the consequences, she had no choice but to swiftly depart from the city. It was during this time that she crossed paths with the kindred spirits [[Gijimu]] and [[Koyu]], joining forces to form their bandit group.

~~During~~ the [[Dunan Unification War]], Lo Wen ~~was taken captive~~ by [[Neclord]]~~'s forces as they invaded~~ [[Tinto Principality]]. ~~She was apparently not taken~~ to be ~~a bride, but~~ as a "snack" for Neclord ~~himself, something with affronted her. After being rescued, she, along with Gijimu and Koyu, joined the [[New State Army]]~~.

Amidst the [[Dunan Unification War]], Lo Wen found herself ensnared by the forces of the sinister [[Neclord]] during his invasion of [[Tinto Principality]]. However, she quickly proved herself resilient, defying her captor as she refused to be taken merely as a "snack" for Neclord.

~~Following~~ the war, Lo Wen returned to Two River, ~~where she lived happily,~~ opening a restaurant ~~and thus fulfilling~~ a ~~dream~~. ~~When~~ she ~~heard that~~ her sworn brother Gijimu ~~was fighting~~ bandits in the [[Grassland]], ~~Lo Wen quickly decided~~ to aid him, ~~fighting against~~ the fake [[Fire Bringer]] in [[Milit Village]].

Eventually rescued from her precarious situation, she, along with Gijimu and Koyu, pledged their loyalty to the [[New State Army]], fighting valiantly for the cause of peace. After the war's conclusion, Lo Wen returned to Two River, finding joy in fulfilling her dream of opening a restaurant.

Content with her life, she embraced her new role as a restaurateur. However, when she learned of her sworn brother Gijimu's battle against bandits in the [[Grassland]], she could not stand idly by. Determined to aid him, she courageously confronted the fake [[Fire Bringer]] in [[Milit Village]], showing her unwavering loyalty to her sworn brothers.

==Gameplay==

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 {{Quote| Okay!!! I'm going to kick some tail!!! | Lo Wen}}
-Lo Wen is a member of the [[Lampdragon Bandits]]. Although she dressed and often acted like a bandit, overall, she was the most well-mannered and put together of the trio. As a warrior, she wielded a heavy ball on a chain, which she flung at the enemy with great force.
+Lo Wen was a spirited member of the notorious [[Lampdragon Bandits]], adopting the appearance and mannerisms befitting a bandit. Yet, among the trio, she stood out as the most well-mannered and composed individual. A skilled warrior, she wielded a heavy ball attached to a chain, employing it with remarkable force to combat her adversaries.
-She once lived in [[Two River City]], but after it was discovered that she was embezzling money from one of the members of Two River's three Houses of Parliament, she had to leave town in a hurry. She would then meet [[Gijimu]] and [[Koyu]] and became part of their group.
+In the past, Lo Wen resided in [[Two River City]]. However, her actions caught the attention of the city's Three Houses of Parliament when they discovered her involvement in embezzling money. Faced with the consequences, she had no choice but to swiftly depart from the city. It was during this time that she crossed paths with the kindred spirits [[Gijimu]] and [[Koyu]], joining forces to form their bandit group.
-During the [[Dunan Unification War]], Lo Wen was taken captive by [[Neclord]]'s forces as they invaded [[Tinto Principality]]. She was apparently not taken to be a bride, but as a "snack" for Neclord himself, something with affronted her. After being rescued, she, along with Gijimu and Koyu, joined the [[New State Army]].
+Amidst the [[Dunan Unification War]], Lo Wen found herself ensnared by the forces of the sinister [[Neclord]] during his invasion of [[Tinto Principality]]. However, she quickly proved herself resilient, defying her captor as she refused to be taken merely as a "snack" for Neclord.
-Following the war, Lo Wen returned to Two River, where she lived happily, opening a restaurant and thus fulfilling a dream. When she heard that her sworn brother Gijimu was fighting bandits in the [[Grassland]], Lo Wen quickly decided to aid him, fighting against the fake [[Fire Bringer]] in [[Milit Village]].
+Eventually rescued from her precarious situation, she, along with Gijimu and Koyu, pledged their loyalty to the [[New State Army]], fighting valiantly for the cause of peace. After the war's conclusion, Lo Wen returned to Two River, finding joy in fulfilling her dream of opening a restaurant.
+Content with her life, she embraced her new role as a restaurateur. However, when she learned of her sworn brother Gijimu's battle against bandits in the [[Grassland]], she could not stand idly by. Determined to aid him, she courageously confronted the fake [[Fire Bringer]] in [[Milit Village]], showing her unwavering loyalty to her sworn brothers.
 ==Gameplay==