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{{quote | Unh....it's my fault....My power wasn't enough....I couldn't protect this village...So my journey was just a waste of time.... | Hanna}}

Hanna is a warrior from the [[Nameless Lands]]. ~~She had left~~ her ~~home and went~~ on a journey ~~in order to use~~ her ~~sword~~ in ~~battle. She was blunt and tended not to speak much~~, ~~but~~ her ~~well-trained body~~ and ~~glowering face showed that she was a warrior of the highest caliber who had fought~~ on ~~many a battlefield~~.

Hanna was a formidable warrior hailing from the [[Nameless Lands]]. Driven by an unyielding desire to wield her sword in battle, she embarked on a journey far from her homeland. Though generally reticent in speech, her imposing presence, honed physique, and stern countenance spoke volumes about her exceptional prowess on numerous battlefields.

~~She was staying~~ in [[Toto Village]], ~~enjoying its calmness despite her search for battle, when~~ the [[Dunan Unification War]] ~~broke out~~. ~~When Toto was razed~~ by the [[Highland Army]], ~~Hanna embraced her rage at what the Highland Army had done and her~~ helplessness in being unable to prevent it. In ~~order~~ to ~~try and stop~~ Highland and avenge the village, she ~~would lend her power to~~ the mercenary forces.

While seeking a clash of blades, Hanna found respite in the tranquil atmosphere of [[Toto Village]]. However, the outbreak of the [[Dunan Unification War]] disrupted her peaceful sojourn. Witnessing the devastation wrought by the [[Highland Army]] upon Toto Village ignited a raging fury within Hanna, coupled with a sense of helplessness in being unable to prevent the tragedy. In her quest to halt Highland's advance and avenge the village, she aligned herself with the mercenary forces.

~~Once~~ the [[New State Army]] ~~was established~~, ~~she would serve as~~ an infantry captain, ~~quickly overwhelming~~ enemy soldiers, ~~especially~~ those ~~who foolishly doubted~~ her strength as a woman.

As the [[New State Army]] took shape, Hanna assumed the role of an infantry captain, exhibiting an unparalleled prowess that swiftly overwhelmed enemy soldiers, particularly those foolish enough to doubt her strength as a woman.

~~Although normally a woman~~ of ~~few words~~, Hanna ~~did get along well with~~ [[Oulan]], ~~due to~~ their ~~similar~~ attitudes and strength. The two ~~often trained together~~, ~~developing~~ the [[Tackle Attack]] ~~as a result~~. ~~As a~~ warrior, her ~~favorite~~ food ~~was meat~~, ~~although there was nothing she wouldn't eat~~.

Despite her usual brevity of speech, Hanna found a kindred spirit in [[Oulan]], their shared attitudes and strength fostering a strong bond. The two warriors frequently engaged in joint training sessions, culminating in the development of the formidable [[Tackle Attack]] technique. A true warrior at heart, Hanna favored meat as her go-to food, yet displayed an open-mindedness towards culinary experiences.

~~Following~~ the war, Hanna ~~left to continue~~ on her journey, ~~heading in the direction of~~ the [[Grassland]] in ~~search of battle~~.

With the conclusion of the war, Hanna departed once more on her unending journey, directing her steps toward the [[Grassland]], eagerly seeking new battles to engage in.

==Gameplay==

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 {{quote | Unh....it's my fault....My power wasn't enough....I  couldn't protect this village...So my journey was just a waste of time.... | Hanna}}
-Hanna is a warrior from the [[Nameless Lands]]. She had left her home and went on a journey in order to use her sword in battle. She was blunt and tended not to speak much, but her well-trained body and glowering face showed that she was a warrior of the highest caliber who had fought on many a battlefield.
+Hanna was a formidable warrior hailing from the [[Nameless Lands]]. Driven by an unyielding desire to wield her sword in battle, she embarked on a journey far from her homeland. Though generally reticent in speech, her imposing presence, honed physique, and stern countenance spoke volumes about her exceptional prowess on numerous battlefields.
-She was staying in [[Toto Village]], enjoying its calmness despite her search for battle, when the [[Dunan Unification War]] broke out. When Toto was razed by the [[Highland Army]], Hanna embraced her rage at what the Highland Army had done and her helplessness in being unable to prevent it. In order to try and stop Highland and avenge the village, she would lend her power to the mercenary forces.
+While seeking a clash of blades, Hanna found respite in the tranquil atmosphere of [[Toto Village]]. However, the outbreak of the [[Dunan Unification War]] disrupted her peaceful sojourn. Witnessing the devastation wrought by the [[Highland Army]] upon Toto Village ignited a raging fury within Hanna, coupled with a sense of helplessness in being unable to prevent the tragedy. In her quest to halt Highland's advance and avenge the village, she aligned herself with the mercenary forces.
-Once the [[New State Army]] was established, she would serve as an infantry captain, quickly overwhelming enemy soldiers, especially those who foolishly doubted her strength as a woman.
+As the [[New State Army]] took shape, Hanna assumed the role of an infantry captain, exhibiting an unparalleled prowess that swiftly overwhelmed enemy soldiers, particularly those foolish enough to doubt her strength as a woman.
-Although normally a woman of few words, Hanna did get along well with [[Oulan]], due to their similar attitudes and strength. The two often trained together, developing the [[Tackle Attack]] as a result. As a warrior, her favorite food was meat, although there was nothing she wouldn't eat.
+Despite her usual brevity of speech, Hanna found a kindred spirit in [[Oulan]], their shared attitudes and strength fostering a strong bond. The two warriors frequently engaged in joint training sessions, culminating in the development of the formidable [[Tackle Attack]] technique. A true warrior at heart, Hanna favored meat as her go-to food, yet displayed an open-mindedness towards culinary experiences.
-Following the war, Hanna left to continue on her journey, heading in the direction of the [[Grassland]] in search of battle.
+With the conclusion of the war, Hanna departed once more on her unending journey, directing her steps toward the [[Grassland]], eagerly seeking new battles to engage in.
 ==Gameplay==