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Bolgan is a young man ~~who performs~~ a circus act as a fire-breather. ~~Previously, Bolgan was in another~~ circus, where he learned how to ~~use~~ a [[Fire Breath Rune]]. However, Bolgan ~~ran~~ away from the circus ~~after enduring bullying there, with~~ [[Eilie]]~~'s aid~~ and ~~began traveling with [[~~Rina]] and Eilie.

Bolgan was a young man with a unique circus act as a fire-breather. He previously belonged to a circus where he learned how to wield a [[Fire Breath Rune]]. However, due to facing bullying and mistreatment, Bolgan decided to run away from the circus. With the help of [[Eilie]], he was able to escape and set off on a journey alongside Rina and Eilie, who treated him as a brother.

~~The trio's~~ travels ~~eventually took~~ them to [[Ryube Village]] in the [[City-State of Jowston]], where they ~~met~~ [[Hero (Suikoden II)|the hero]]. ~~After briefly traveling together in order to traverse~~ the ~~dangerous~~ [[North Sparrow Pass]], Bolgan and his sisters joined the ~~[[New State Army]] after reuniting~~ with the hero in [[Coronet Town~~|Coronet~~]].

Their travels led them to [[Ryube Village]] in the [[City-State of Jowston]], where they encountered [[Hero (Suikoden II)|the hero]]. To navigate the treacherous [[North Sparrow Pass]], Bolgan and his sisters joined forces with the hero temporarily. Afterward, they reunited with the hero in [[Coronet Town]] and chose to become members of the [[New State Army]].

Bolgan ~~became part of~~ the hero's Royal Guard and ~~even wished that~~ the hero ~~would become part of the~~ circus troupe. ~~Bolgan~~ also ~~discovered an~~ interest in learning and ~~studied frequently~~ at the library.

Bolgan was granted a position in the hero's Royal Guard, and he expressed a desire for the hero to join their circus troupe. He also developed a keen interest in learning and spent much time studying at the local library.

Following the ~~end~~ of the [[Dunan Unification War]], Bolgan returned to traveling with the circus troupe~~, as well as~~ continuing ~~to study~~. The troupe ~~would~~ eventually ~~end up in~~ [[Milit Village]] where Bolgan ~~would help~~ [[Nash Latkje~~|Nash~~]] and others ~~fight~~ off a raid ~~from~~ the fraudulent [[Fire Bringer]].

Following the conclusion of the [[Dunan Unification War]], Bolgan returned to traveling with the circus troupe while continuing his studies. The troupe's journey eventually brought them to [[Milit Village]], where Bolgan played a crucial role in helping [[Nash Latkje]] and others fend off a raid orchestrated by the fraudulent [[Fire Bringer]].

==Gameplay==

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 {{quote| Fight hard, Riou. Bolgan fight hard too. | Bolgan}}
-Bolgan is a young man who performs a circus act as a fire-breather.  Previously, Bolgan was in another circus, where he learned how to use a [[Fire Breath Rune]]. However, Bolgan ran away from the circus after enduring bullying there, with [[Eilie]]'s aid and began traveling with [[Rina]] and Eilie.
+Bolgan was a young man with a unique circus act as a fire-breather. He previously belonged to a circus where he learned how to wield a [[Fire Breath Rune]]. However, due to facing bullying and mistreatment, Bolgan decided to run away from the circus. With the help of [[Eilie]], he was able to escape and set off on a journey alongside Rina and Eilie, who treated him as a brother.
-The trio's travels eventually took them to [[Ryube Village]] in the [[City-State of Jowston]], where they met [[Hero (Suikoden II)|the hero]]. After briefly traveling together in order to traverse the dangerous [[North Sparrow Pass]], Bolgan and his sisters joined the [[New State Army]] after reuniting with the hero in [[Coronet Town|Coronet]].
+Their travels led them to [[Ryube Village]] in the [[City-State of Jowston]], where they encountered [[Hero (Suikoden II)|the hero]]. To navigate the treacherous [[North Sparrow Pass]], Bolgan and his sisters joined forces with the hero temporarily. Afterward, they reunited with the hero in [[Coronet Town]] and chose to become members of the [[New State Army]].
-Bolgan became part of the hero's Royal Guard and even wished that the hero would become part of the circus troupe. Bolgan also discovered an interest in learning and studied frequently at the library.
+Bolgan was granted a position in the hero's Royal Guard, and he expressed a desire for the hero to join their circus troupe. He also developed a keen interest in learning and spent much time studying at the local library.
-Following the end of the [[Dunan Unification War]], Bolgan returned to traveling with the circus troupe, as well as continuing to study. The troupe would eventually end up in [[Milit Village]] where Bolgan would help [[Nash Latkje|Nash]] and others fight off a raid from the fraudulent [[Fire Bringer]].
+Following the conclusion of the [[Dunan Unification War]], Bolgan returned to traveling with the circus troupe while continuing his studies. The troupe's journey eventually brought them to [[Milit Village]], where Bolgan played a crucial role in helping [[Nash Latkje]] and others fend off a raid orchestrated by the fraudulent [[Fire Bringer]].
 ==Gameplay==