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Alanis is the bright, lively daughter of traders and a member of the [[Saint Loa Knights]], a group formed with her friends [[Melville]] and [[Elliot]]. There, she is known as "The Silver Maiden".

As her parents were traders, she moved a lot in her childhood and rarely had time to make friends before moving on. ~~However~~, in [[Vinay del Zexay]] she was able to form a close friendship with Melville and Elliot. She explored the [[North Cavern]] with her friends and helped to uncover [[Guillaume]]'s underhanded dealing. These, and other adventures, strengthened her bond with her friends.

As her parents were traders, she moved a lot in her childhood and rarely had time to make friends before moving on. Still, in [[Vinay del Zexay]] she was able to form a close friendship with Melville and Elliot. She explored the [[North Cavern]] with her friends and helped to uncover [[Guillaume]]'s underhanded dealing. These, and other adventures, strengthened her bond with her friends.

Following this, Alanis was supposed to move with her parents to the [[Nameless Lands]] but the [[War of the Champions]] interfered, stranding her and her family in the [[Great Hollow]]. She would be reunited with her friends when Melville visited, and she joined the [[Fire Bringer]].

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 Alanis is the bright, lively daughter of traders and a member of the [[Saint Loa Knights]], a group formed with her friends [[Melville]] and [[Elliot]]. There, she is known as "The Silver Maiden".
-As her parents were traders, she moved a lot in her childhood and rarely had time to make friends before moving on. However, in [[Vinay del Zexay]] she was able to form a close friendship with Melville and Elliot. She explored the [[North Cavern]] with her friends and helped to uncover [[Guillaume]]'s underhanded dealing. These, and other adventures, strengthened her bond with her friends.
+As her parents were traders, she moved a lot in her childhood and rarely had time to make friends before moving on. Still, in [[Vinay del Zexay]] she was able to form a close friendship with Melville and Elliot. She explored the [[North Cavern]] with her friends and helped to uncover [[Guillaume]]'s underhanded dealing. These, and other adventures, strengthened her bond with her friends.
 Following this, Alanis was supposed to move with her parents to the [[Nameless Lands]] but the [[War of the Champions]] interfered, stranding her and her family in the [[Great Hollow]]. She would be reunited with her friends when Melville visited, and she joined the [[Fire Bringer]].