Corselia: Difference between revisions

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She would first meet [[Kyril]] in [[Merseto]] and would later join him to escape the clutches of Iskas, who wanted to use her to cement his coup attempt. Corselia was also determined to destroy the [[Evil Eye]] and to find a way to restore people transformed into [[Fishmen]] back to normal. As she travelled, members of the [[Imperial Faction]] tried to persuade her to return home, but her sense of responsibility only grew as she saw the evils plaguing the Empire. Her position also made her a target for [[Heinz]], who wished to kidnap her for the benefit of [[Scarlet Moon Empire|Scarlet Moon]] but Corselia and [[Coop]] were able to prevent this.

Although she could come of as mature and austere, when interacting with children closer to her own age like [[Rene]] and [[Rita]], she would become more open and act more like the child she still was deep down.

Although she could come off as mature and austere, when interacting with children closer to her own age like [[Rene]] and [[Rita]], she would become more open and act more like the child she still was deep down.

After defeating Iskas and ending the brief civil war in Kooluk, Corselia was in line to become the next ruler of the nation. Instead, seeing the destruction that the factional conflict had wrought, she chose instead to collapse the once proud nation. Following this, she would travel the land searching for Kyril, who vanished several years later, seemingly without success.

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 She would first meet [[Kyril]] in [[Merseto]] and would later join him to escape the clutches of Iskas, who wanted to use her to cement his coup attempt. Corselia was also determined to destroy the [[Evil Eye]] and to find a way to restore people transformed into [[Fishmen]] back to normal. As she travelled, members of the [[Imperial Faction]] tried to persuade her to return home, but her sense of responsibility only grew as she saw the evils plaguing the Empire. Her position also made her a target for [[Heinz]], who wished to kidnap her for the benefit of [[Scarlet Moon Empire|Scarlet Moon]] but Corselia and [[Coop]] were able to prevent this.
-Although she could come of as mature and austere, when interacting with children closer to her own age like [[Rene]] and [[Rita]], she would become more open and act more like the child she still was deep down.
+Although she could come off as mature and austere, when interacting with children closer to her own age like [[Rene]] and [[Rita]], she would become more open and act more like the child she still was deep down.
 After defeating Iskas and ending the brief civil war in Kooluk, Corselia was in line to become the next ruler of the nation. Instead, seeing the destruction that the factional conflict had wrought, she chose instead to collapse the once proud nation. Following this, she would travel the land searching for Kyril, who vanished several years later, seemingly without success.