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Kirkis was an idealistic elf who hated the prejudice that existed between the races inhabiting the [[Great Forest]], wishing for peaceful cooperation between [[elf|elves]], [[dwarf|dwarves]] and [[human]]s. As elves were traditionally disdainful of other races, his attitude was considered quite radical and was generally viewed with suspicion and mockery.

Hearing ~~rumours~~ of the [[Burning Mirror]], Kirkis journeyed to ask the [[Toran Liberation Army]] for help against [[Kwanda Rosman]], who was plotting to destroy the [[Village of the Elves]], running from his village and swimming all the way across [[Lake Toran]], nearly drowning in the process.

Hearing rumors of the [[Burning Mirror]], Kirkis journeyed to ask the [[Toran Liberation Army]] for help against [[Kwanda Rosman]], who was plotting to destroy the [[Village of the Elves]], running from his village and swimming all the way across [[Lake Toran]], nearly drowning in the process.

Despite his best efforts, and the aid of the Liberation Army, the village was indeed destroyed, by Kwanda's Burning Mirror. Following the [[Battle at Pannu Yakuta Castle]], he would join the Liberation Army along with his sweetheart [[Sylvina]], continuing to fight for peace.

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 Kirkis was an idealistic elf who hated the prejudice that existed between the races inhabiting the [[Great Forest]], wishing for peaceful cooperation between [[elf|elves]], [[dwarf|dwarves]] and [[human]]s. As elves were traditionally disdainful of other races, his attitude was considered quite radical and was generally viewed with suspicion and mockery.
-Hearing rumours of the [[Burning Mirror]], Kirkis journeyed to ask the [[Toran Liberation Army]] for help against [[Kwanda Rosman]], who was plotting to destroy the [[Village of the Elves]], running from his village and swimming all the way across [[Lake Toran]], nearly drowning in the process.
+Hearing rumors of the [[Burning Mirror]], Kirkis journeyed to ask the [[Toran Liberation Army]] for help against [[Kwanda Rosman]], who was plotting to destroy the [[Village of the Elves]], running from his village and swimming all the way across [[Lake Toran]], nearly drowning in the process.
 Despite his best efforts, and the aid of the Liberation Army, the village was indeed destroyed, by Kwanda's Burning Mirror. Following the [[Battle at Pannu Yakuta Castle]], he would join the Liberation Army along with his sweetheart [[Sylvina]], continuing to fight for peace.