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{{quote | Isn't there a sword out there somewhere that would inspire me? A sword that would make me say 'Boy I'd like to sharpen that!' | Tessai}}

Tessai was a blacksmith who has made forging weapons his vocation and devoted all of his passion to his work. His passion for great weapons was what initially led him to become a blacksmith. He had a ~~smithy~~ in [[Kuskus Town]] and a single disciple, the rest having been expelled or rejected at one point or another. Like many blacksmiths, he longed for the opportunity to work on a great or legendary sword.

Tessai was a blacksmith who has made forging weapons his vocation and devoted all of his passion to his work. His passion for great weapons was what initially led him to become a blacksmith.

He had a workshop in [[Kuskus Town]] and a single disciple, the rest having been expelled or rejected at one point or another. Like many blacksmiths, he longed for the opportunity to work on a great or legendary sword.

However, such an opportunity did not come along, and eventually his passion for his work waned. By the time of the [[Dunan Unification War]], he found himself jaded and uninspired. He would spend much time away from his workshop in Kuskus, hoping to find a legendary sword such as the [[Star Dragon Sword]] or the [[Dragon King Sword]] to inspire him.

~~Return~~ to Kuskus as dissatisfied as ever, when he noticed that [[Viktor]] wielded the Star Dragon Sword, his passion returned~~, and he~~ begged to join the [[New State Army]] in order to work on the sword with his own two hands. Tessai was a talented smith, able to strength a weapon to its maximum level, providing he had the right tools.

Returning to Kuskus as dissatisfied as ever, when he noticed that [[Viktor]] wielded the Star Dragon Sword, his passion returned. He begged to join the [[New State Army]] in order to work on the sword with his own two hands. Tessai was a talented smith, able to strength a weapon to its maximum level, providing he had the right tools.

Following the [[Dunan Unification War]], Tessai's stock as a blacksmith rose considerably and he continued to work at the [[New State Army Headquarters]], dreaming of working with famed weapons.

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 {{quote | Isn't there a sword out there somewhere that would inspire me? A sword that would make me say 'Boy I'd like to sharpen that!' | Tessai}}
-Tessai was a blacksmith who has made forging weapons his vocation and devoted all of his passion to his work. His passion for great weapons was what initially led him to become a blacksmith. He had a smithy in [[Kuskus Town]] and a single disciple, the rest having been expelled or rejected at one point or another. Like many blacksmiths, he longed for the opportunity to work on a great or legendary sword.
+Tessai was a blacksmith who has made forging weapons his vocation and devoted all of his passion to his work. His passion for great weapons was what initially led him to become a blacksmith.
+He had a workshop in [[Kuskus Town]] and a single disciple, the rest having been expelled or rejected at one point or another. Like many blacksmiths, he longed for the opportunity to work on a great or legendary sword.
 However, such an opportunity did not come along, and eventually his passion for his work waned. By the time of the [[Dunan Unification War]], he found himself jaded and uninspired. He would spend much time away from his workshop in Kuskus, hoping to find a legendary sword such as the [[Star Dragon Sword]] or the [[Dragon King Sword]] to inspire him.
-Return to Kuskus as dissatisfied as ever, when he noticed that [[Viktor]] wielded the Star Dragon Sword, his passion returned, and he begged to join the [[New State Army]] in order to work on the sword with his own two hands. Tessai was a talented smith, able to strength a weapon to its maximum level, providing he had the right tools.
+Returning to Kuskus as dissatisfied as ever, when he noticed that [[Viktor]] wielded the Star Dragon Sword, his passion returned. He begged to join the [[New State Army]] in order to work on the sword with his own two hands. Tessai was a talented smith, able to strength a weapon to its maximum level, providing he had the right tools.
 Following the [[Dunan Unification War]], Tessai's stock as a blacksmith rose considerably and he continued to work at the [[New State Army Headquarters]], dreaming of working with famed weapons.