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==History==

Makumaku is a ~~large~~ [[~~Flying Squirrel~~]] ~~who comes~~ from the [[Greenhill Forest]]~~. He wears~~ a ~~distinctive~~ blue cape ~~and is the second member of [[Mukumuku]]'s [[Flying Squirrel Corps]]~~.

Makumaku was a remarkable and sizable [[flying squirrel]] hailing from the lush [[Greenhill Forest]], recognized for his distinctive appearance, characterized by a striking blue cape.

~~Although Makumaku usually appears calm and cool, deep inside his soul burns with passion and energy. During~~ the [[~~Dunan Unification War~~]]~~, he decided to join the~~ [[~~New State Army~~]] ~~after noticing its leader wandering around~~ the ~~area outside [[Greenhill City]]~~.

Serving as the second member of the esteemed [[Mukumuku]]'s [[Flying Squirrel Corps]], Makumaku's presence added to the corps' strength. Despite his outwardly calm and composed demeanor, Makumaku's inner essence was ablaze with unyielding passion and boundless energy.

~~After~~ the [[Dunan Unification War]] ~~ended~~, Makumaku presumably ~~returned~~ to Greenhill Forest.

In the midst of the [[Dunan Unification War]], Makumaku found himself drawn to the cause of the [[New State Army]], recognizing its [[Hero (Suikoden II)|leader]] wandering in the vicinity outside Greenhill City.

Upon the conclusion of the Dunan Unification War, Makumaku's path presumably led him back to his home in Greenhill Forest.

==Gameplay==

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 ==History==
-Makumaku is a large [[Flying Squirrel]] who comes from the [[Greenhill Forest]]. He wears a distinctive blue cape and is the second member of [[Mukumuku]]'s [[Flying Squirrel Corps]].
+Makumaku was a remarkable and sizable [[flying squirrel]] hailing from the lush [[Greenhill Forest]], recognized for his distinctive appearance, characterized by a striking blue cape.
-Although Makumaku usually appears calm and cool, deep inside his soul burns with passion and energy. During the [[Dunan Unification War]], he decided to join the [[New State Army]] after noticing its leader wandering around the area outside [[Greenhill City]].
+Serving as the second member of the esteemed [[Mukumuku]]'s [[Flying Squirrel Corps]], Makumaku's presence added to the corps' strength. Despite his outwardly calm and composed demeanor, Makumaku's inner essence was ablaze with unyielding passion and boundless energy.
-After the [[Dunan Unification War]] ended, Makumaku presumably returned to Greenhill Forest.
+In the midst of the [[Dunan Unification War]], Makumaku found himself drawn to the cause of the [[New State Army]], recognizing its [[Hero (Suikoden II)|leader]] wandering in the vicinity outside Greenhill City.
+Upon the conclusion of the Dunan Unification War, Makumaku's path presumably led him back to his home in Greenhill Forest.
 ==Gameplay==