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Gantetsu ~~was~~ a neophyte of [[Qlon Temple]] ~~who often boasted~~ of strength ~~and was considered~~ something of a roughneck. ~~He was excommunicated due to~~ his violent tendencies and his ~~habit of getting drunk on sake~~. ~~He could not be said to have held a deep~~ faith ~~and was more interested than~~ training his body ~~than~~ his ~~spirit~~.

Gantetsu, once a neophyte of [[Lorimar]]'s [[Qlon Temple]], was known for his frequent boasts of physical strength, earning a reputation as something of a roughneck. However, his violent tendencies and penchant for indulging in sake ultimately led to his excommunication from the temple by [[Fukien]]. It became evident that his faith lacked depth, as he prioritized training his body over nurturing his spiritual growth.

Gantetsu ~~eventually travelled to~~ [[South Window City]], ~~brooding there without any goal in mind. That is until~~ he ~~would lose to~~ the [[Hero (Suikoden II)|~~the~~ leader]] of the [[New State Army]] and his ~~friends~~ in a test of strength. ~~Shocked~~, ~~Gantetsu would agree~~ to ~~join~~ the New State Army.

After his expulsion, Gantetsu found himself aimlessly brooding in [[South Window City]] with no clear purpose. However, fate took an unexpected turn when he encountered and suffered defeat at the hands of the [[Hero (Suikoden II)|leader]] of the [[New State Army]] and his comrades in a test of strength. This humbling experience shocked Gantetsu, leading him to acknowledge the New State Army's prowess and ultimately convincing him to join their ranks.

Following the ~~end~~ of the [[Dunan Unification War]], Gantetsu returned to [[Qlon Temple~~]] to begin his training anew~~, ~~his expulsion rescinded due to~~ his service during the war.

Following the conclusion of the [[Dunan Unification War]], Gantetsu returned to the sacred grounds of Qlon Temple, where, through his service during the war, he had earned the reinstatement of his status within the temple. With a newfound commitment, Gantetsu began his training anew, embracing the opportunity for personal development and spiritual refinement within the temple's teachings.

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 {{quote| I am Gantetsu!!! A great priest!! | Gantetsu}}
-Gantetsu was a neophyte of [[Qlon Temple]] who often boasted of strength and was considered something of a roughneck. He was excommunicated due to his violent tendencies and his habit of getting drunk on sake. He could not be said to have held a deep faith and was more interested than training his body than his spirit.
+Gantetsu, once a neophyte of [[Lorimar]]'s [[Qlon Temple]], was known for his frequent boasts of physical strength, earning a reputation as something of a roughneck. However, his violent tendencies and penchant for indulging in sake ultimately led to his excommunication from the temple by [[Fukien]]. It became evident that his faith lacked depth, as he prioritized training his body over nurturing his spiritual growth.
-Gantetsu eventually travelled to [[South Window City]], brooding there without any goal in mind. That is until he would lose to the [[Hero (Suikoden II)|the leader]] of the [[New State Army]] and his friends in a test of strength. Shocked, Gantetsu would agree to join the New State Army.
+After his expulsion, Gantetsu found himself aimlessly brooding in [[South Window City]] with no clear purpose. However, fate took an unexpected turn when he encountered and suffered defeat at the hands of the [[Hero (Suikoden II)|leader]] of the [[New State Army]] and his comrades in a test of strength. This humbling experience shocked Gantetsu, leading him to acknowledge the New State Army's prowess and ultimately convincing him to join their ranks.
-Following the end of the [[Dunan Unification War]], Gantetsu returned to [[Qlon Temple]] to begin his training anew, his expulsion rescinded due to his service during the war.
+Following the conclusion of the [[Dunan Unification War]], Gantetsu returned to the sacred grounds of Qlon Temple, where, through his service during the war, he had earned the reinstatement of his status within the temple. With a newfound commitment, Gantetsu began his training anew, embracing the opportunity for personal development and spiritual refinement within the temple's teachings.
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