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Jango was the boss of a pirate gang whose territory lay within the [[Island Nations]]. Although brutish and daring, he was also incredibly adept at ship handling and so was trusted by his peers as a leader and a captain.

Wanting to fight together with those ~~oppossing~~ [[Graham Cray]] and the [[Kooluk Empire]], he forced his way onto the [[Headquarters Ship]] alongside [[Brec]] and joined the crew. His pirate skills honed from years in the profession helped sink many enemy ships during the battles of the [[Island Liberation War]].

Wanting to fight together with those opposing [[Graham Cray]] and the [[Kooluk Empire]], he forced his way onto the [[Headquarters Ship]] alongside [[Brec]] and joined the crew. His pirate skills honed from years in the profession helped sink many enemy ships during the battles of the [[Island Liberation War]].

Following the war, he and Brec would go on to chase down and capture the remnants of [[Cray Trading Company]] throughout the area.

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 Jango was the boss of a pirate gang whose territory lay within the [[Island Nations]]. Although brutish and daring, he was also incredibly adept at ship handling and so was trusted by his peers as a leader and a captain.
-Wanting to fight together with those oppossing [[Graham Cray]] and the [[Kooluk Empire]], he forced his way onto the [[Headquarters Ship]] alongside [[Brec]] and joined the crew. His pirate skills honed from years in the profession helped sink many enemy ships during the battles of the [[Island Liberation War]].
+Wanting to fight together with those opposing [[Graham Cray]] and the [[Kooluk Empire]], he forced his way onto the [[Headquarters Ship]] alongside [[Brec]] and joined the crew. His pirate skills honed from years in the profession helped sink many enemy ships during the battles of the [[Island Liberation War]].
 Following the war, he and Brec would go on to chase down and capture the remnants of [[Cray Trading Company]] throughout the area.