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{{quote | An indecisive, ordinary young man and the master of Lake Castle. | Thomas' profile}}

Thomas is the illegitimate son of [[Zexen Council]] representative [[Lowma]]. He was raised in the [[Nameless Lands]] where he grew to have a timid personality and poor fighting ability. However, he is also a quietly determined person, willing to work hard.

Thomas is the illegitimate son of [[Zexen Council]] representative [[Lowma]]. His mother was a vendor from a remote country. Her personality was much like Thomas'. She fell in love with Lowma and bore his child, only to be abandoned. He was raised in the [[Nameless Lands]] where he grew to have a timid personality and poor fighting ability. However, he is also a quietly determined person, willing to work hard.

He was raised in the Nameless Lands by his mother, but after her death in a [[Grassland]] raid, Thomas journeyed to [[Zexen Federation|Zexen]] per his mother's request to live with his father. However, as an illegitimate child was a political liability, Lowma quickly got rid of Thomas by assigning him lordship over the obscure, crumbling [[Budehuc Castle]] in Zexen's northern frontier. Thomas had no grand designs when coming to Zexen, save to see the face of the father he had never met.

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 {{quote | An indecisive, ordinary young man and the master of Lake Castle. | Thomas' profile}}
-Thomas is the illegitimate son of [[Zexen Council]] representative [[Lowma]]. He was raised in the [[Nameless Lands]] where he grew to have a timid personality and poor fighting ability. However, he is also a quietly determined person, willing to work hard.
+Thomas is the illegitimate son of [[Zexen Council]] representative [[Lowma]]. His mother was a vendor from a remote country. Her personality was much like Thomas'. She fell in love with Lowma and bore his child, only to be abandoned. He was raised in the [[Nameless Lands]] where he grew to have a timid personality and poor fighting ability. However, he is also a quietly determined person, willing to work hard.
 He was raised in the Nameless Lands by his mother, but after her death in a [[Grassland]] raid, Thomas journeyed to [[Zexen Federation|Zexen]] per his mother's request to live with his father. However, as an illegitimate child was a political liability, Lowma quickly got rid of Thomas by assigning him lordship over the obscure, crumbling [[Budehuc Castle]] in Zexen's northern frontier. Thomas had no grand designs when coming to Zexen, save to see the face of the father he had never met.