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When the [[Highland Army]] suddenly invaded [[South Window Principality]] following the fall of [[Muse City]], Granmeyer had surrendered to [[Solon Jhee]] without resistance. His reward for his efforts to avert violence would be his immediate beheading. The following morning, his head would be displayed on South Window's castle wall for all to see.

Later, some would criticize Granmeyer's surrender for indicating that he lacked the sense of responsibility needed for a ~~Mayor~~ to take charge of the lives of his citizens but it is certain that he surrendered to protect the peaceful lives of the citizens he served.

Later, some would criticize Granmeyer's surrender for indicating that he lacked the sense of responsibility needed for a mayor to take charge of the lives of his citizens, but it is certain that he surrendered to protect the peaceful lives of the citizens he served.

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 When the [[Highland Army]] suddenly invaded [[South Window Principality]] following the fall of [[Muse City]], Granmeyer had surrendered to [[Solon Jhee]] without resistance. His reward for his efforts to avert violence would be his immediate beheading. The following morning, his head would be displayed on South Window's castle wall for all to see.
-Later, some would criticize Granmeyer's surrender for indicating that he lacked the sense of responsibility needed for a Mayor to take charge of the lives of his citizens but it is certain that he surrendered to protect the peaceful lives of the citizens he served.
+Later, some would criticize Granmeyer's surrender for indicating that he lacked the sense of responsibility needed for a mayor to take charge of the lives of his citizens, but it is certain that he surrendered to protect the peaceful lives of the citizens he served.
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